Zeroth Knight - Reviews

A bit of a missed opportunity with theis one. Read 30 chapters, way too little progress and way too much time spent  with the gf.

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please translate this novel 我为道祖，开创仙道！                                                                                                                  

I like how the story isn't flooded with just adding disciples. however, character development is a major weakness

New author who could use a little bit of work on his English at times, but that being said it's better than 99% of the stuff on this site already! The majority of the time the author follows a logical progression, and shows the motivations for the characters actions in a way that makes sense and is engaging.I think this author has a lot of potential, and if he had a professional editor on hand this novel would be almost publishable!Keep on writing, keep on practicing, keep on doing your thing!As a piece of advice, you might want to start distancing yourself from readers comments. As your novel gets more and more popular you will eventually attract some trolls, and some very loud negative voices from idiots who don't know what a proper story is, and couldn't write one to save their lives. Make sure not to let them discourage you!

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Tictoker...................................

"Yes, can l have a glass of water and some food? I'm staving!"

[Player need to rest for 3:00:00, any disturbances to the player the system will automatically shut down for 2 hours]

Please, please, please delete it.

The short and broader man, a look of slight fear yet strong determination, nodded. "Yes, Doflamingo, I am. "