Yu Yan - Reviews

when i read the reviews i honestly felt like i probably wouldn't like this novel but this novel, However i was pleasantly surprised by how much i've enjoyed it. The main character is likeable and has a visible depth and as the novel progresses his growth is obvious to the reader. There is intrigue, there is sex, there is drama. Everything is in this novel, and everything is well thought out and planned and any issues that are in the novel the author is very interactive and discusses them and remedies if need be. And tbh i cant really find any fault apart from minor grammar issues. And for all those who are wondering, NO. There is no NTR and should read the novel and see for yourself.

I like this adaptation of Naruto it's very interesting and cool I also like Sasuke being jealous

Why are the updates so slow??? That is the only thing holding this back.for me.

The setting reminds me of the legendary mechanic but with a fantasy theme added, similarly there are game elements along a promise of players coming in a year time. There are also elves royalties among other things, with the beginning being more of the mc building up his inherited village than solo play.

the book suck mc is a real dummy ???? I have never read a book as bad as this one it really terrible....................................

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This novel of mine I intend to be as perfect as possible. If you support my work I appreciate it. I will take criticism but atleast read the story first before that. I hope you enjoy reading my novel if not I hope you find something better. Like Library of Heaven's Path are Desolate Era. I'm writing this for fun. If in the future webnovel would like a contract with me. That would be nice. For now I hope you enjoy my work. Not a professional writer just a fair warning.

lemme be real with ya improve ur synopsis

WARNING: The story is rated 18+ that contained r*pe and gore, and the book has a slow but solid progress of the story. Please, read with caution.The story has an excellent background and foundation. As far as I have been reading until chapter 80, I didn’t see any big plot hole that might ruin the novel yet. So, you can rest assure that you won’t find any big inconsistency within the novel. As for the other elements, such as characters’s feelings, dialogue, and decisions, I also don’t see any inapropriate thing ‘for’ the author had made them feel alive and consistent for their own chain of actions. I like these aspects a lot. Last but not least, the power system, currently, It hasn’t been shown to us 100% yet, I think that it’s only 10% or 20% that has been shown so far and it contains taste and smell of other famous novels. For example, The Second Coming of Gluttony and Lord of the Mysteries. So, if you are a fan of those 2 famous novels, you CANNOT miss this book.I give you 5 stars, mY pReCiouS!!***Please create a Discord group and Patr.eon***

Everything is good but the story is going too fast and my head is spinning ????u200d↔️???u200d?thanks for the story ???

I can't in good conscience give you anything more than one and a half stars because despite knowing your novel is unedited, you continue to upload new chapters without fixing the flawed ones.

As if i could forget. How am i supposed to do that?