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I hate this stockpile thing. If u want a stockpile Bonus  chapter that is ok but where is usual everyday chapters ...............................

Really Lovely BookThe descriptions of the scenes are accurate and helps my imagination quite a lot.Some missed grammar but they are very negligible.The plot is very interesting with little holes, The MC is strong but I still see some people who can deck him but cannot kill him.But I love the fact of no info dumbs at the very first chapterAlthough I do hate the fact that the system manipulated the mc but I was relieved that the mc noticed but decided to leave it, probably because it needs the system as much as it needs him.overall this novel is part of my must read.Thumbs up to Author??

not bad but the writing quality is atrocious. it's worse then quiet a few MTLs I've read and all this could be easily fixed if the author used grammarly or something similar. I wanted to give the book ago but the mistakes are a bit to numerous for me as of right now. I'll pick this up if the earlier cheaters end up being edited or something but till then, this one isnt for me. good story from what I've read tho, just too many errors for me to read since correcting the spelling un my head kinda takes out the joy of reading.

The story has some great potential to actually work, not gonna lie. The MC is understandable and is fleshed out and not rushed in any way.      

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Writing Quality: The writing quality is good overall, as I can understand it, but there are still some mistakes. I would rate it 4 stars. ⭐⭐⭐⭐Story Development: I didn't enjoy the story development much, except for the moments when the main character (MC) used his brain towards the end. That part was good. I would rate the story development 3 stars. ⭐⭐⭐Characters: Unfortunately, I don't like the MC. I found him to be unintelligent, to the point where it frustrated me. It bothered me how easily he allowed others to see him as weak. Although there were some instances where he regained his strength, they were infrequent. Overall, the character development was not satisfactory, and I would rate it 2 stars. ⭐⭐World Background: The world background has some details, but it often lacks sufficient descriptions. For example, the author uses generic names like "ruin city" without providing enough specific details to fully imagine it. I would rate the world background 3 stars. ⭐⭐⭐Updating Stability: The updating stability is excellent, earning it a 5-star rating. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Evaluation: The story has potential, but the MC's development is a major drawback. It took too long for him to start using his brain effectively, and expecting readers to wait for over 50 chapters for that moment is frustrating. I hope the author considers improving the MC's character earlier in the story.(Note to the author: Please consider this review as constructive feedback. It took me 10 minutes to write, and I hope you take it to heart.)

The chapters are short, comedy is there. The plot is genius. No harem. Releases will take time but im going to do what i can. Im open for feedback. Recommended to read? Yeah absolutely!

"What does that mean?" Renji asked while looking at the shop keeper.

"Yasashi, Miss Yasashi" she replied slowly and gently, guess her name matches her personal, and then she began to fold her arms under her breasts, she then shook her head "I'm afraid that all working ships and fuel is currently inhibited by the pirates"

How I wish that I didn't do those things especially to my dearest elder sister. But I guess, that's another story to tell.

"He is more stable now. But was put in a medical coma on top of his already comatose state." the overseeing Head doctor says.