When You're Gone - Reviews

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The story started out great with the mc slowly getting more dishes and customers until his restaurant became famous in the area the novel was great, but then Chinese patriotism/racism showed up at CH 358, why do I say racism? Because the author thinks that I am Chinese why is my money lower than yours (USD) and thinks that Chinese are superior than everybody.

Simply a masterpiece. The writing style is great. The chaotic mc and the dynamic between the characters is amazing. It got me hooked. It's just a real shame it's dropped.

Wow not bad at all, I would love to see this one get some more attention with consistent updates but well you can’t win them all. Good plot, characters are interesting and things seem to be progressing well. I feel like it had great potential.

The story moves at a steady pace and the MC seems quite caring and likeable. The world background is also well explained. The writing could use some editing, but overall it's shaping up to be an interesting read.

What else can I say, but this story is so scary. The second chapter was the scariest and I love it. I wish the author can write more of this. Good job, author ?

First and foremost! Don't stop at the first chapter or the third, because this is quite good(If you're not quite disturbed by a single thing)The pacing is normal for the start. Good.Humorous MC. Great.(for me at least)Chapter? We have chapters everyday!Grammar. Quite good if you don't sought something only professional writer had.So overall this is great! And i'm expecting for more

Another odd thing that Kaede had noticed was that he was always wearing a white lab coat, even today he had it on. The strange thing is that it was pristine, so he obviously hadn't been working in it. So she honestly couldn't understand why he always had it on.

Senang sekali bisa berkumpul dan bersama keluarga lagi. Apalagi disini, dirumah ini. Sekarang aku tidak kesepian lagi.

Defense: 25

The way magic can attach can be slimed out, in the way shown before. By looking what it can't connect to. When you do it there are many "OP" things that fall away but there still too many possibilities and HERE phantasy comes into play because there can't be found any real arguments why one way or another is not possible to be a connection.

Across the peaceful night, the sound of the girl's cries could be heard. Weeping throughout the middle of the night.