When I Saw Her... - Reviews

The novel smell like plagiat of Night Rangerboth have reincarnation into game worldboth were legendary rogue class before reincarnationthe systems are nearly identicalfrom the look of things both will use double daggersboth have little sibling that need helpthere will be frequent contact with godsafter the poor 5 chapters I could mistake it for Night Ranger

Good story Personally the story seems immature but itbis this immaturity which gives it its ‘uniqueness’Please dont decrease the wuality and please do not drop itI like the fact that the character development is based in arrogance cos it seems he has still not learnt from his brother’s advice(i kinda like the attitude he shows sometimes though)Wonderful story

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"We're so sorry, Mr. Lewis. Pero, hindi po kayo ang nakalagay na legal guardian ng pasyente according to the documents that we have. Your name was only under the sponsor's list that couldn't give you any credit to make decisions for the patient," mahinahong paliwanag ng babaeng nasa information desk.

That's the way I like it and I never get bored

"What!? Oh no Doc, alright, actually there is someone who whispers me to do all this."

keep writing keep writing keep writing. This joint will be groundbreaking for years to come.

Really good story, Amazing author, 100% recommend

Damn! This book is fire? To think I almost not read it. I love this ?

I'm rating this book a five, call me shameless as an author who rates her book, but I'm telling you this book is worth it?❤️

I would like to give a higher rating but I feel this story is more of a synopsis full of suspense and a sprinkling of philosophy. These are not bad but I think the story needs a bit more depth. More detailed descriptions of events instead of summarizing, clear definition of time frames. Clearer understanding of character relationships and dynamics. Side characters need a minimal amount of detail to flesh out their purpose in the story. I think this story is not bad but read with an introspective eye and it is more of a philosophical exercise in how humans may deal with ideas like betrayal, trust and paranoia.

The book is a few chapters but I can tell it's going to be a great book I love the concept and I hope others do too ?❤️