Good novel overall, Author just needs to improve his Grammar cause it's a bit frustrating to read, try using Grammarly or better hire an editor. The story is an absolute gem it's just that your writing is ruining it for many. 4 stars for now
And now we're talking about detectives. I LOVE DETECTIVES. This should be worth more than a thousand reads! The writing on the synopsis alone is very well written. But I hope the chapters will be balanced—solving cases and well, romance. Continue writing, author!!
so far a great story with an interesting concept of an interactive webnovel. defiantly worth a read as you can actually change the direction of the story.
Wow, this is interesting, even though MC doesn't have too much experience at least he's not stupid, continue the story, the spirit of the writer, hopefully the story won't drop !!!
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