Wanted By The Alphas - Reviews

Honestly my only complaint is the length, I'm sad that I caught up so quickly. (though I did binge read all weekend) I cant wait to continue reading as more comes out

I genuinely love the concept behind this, and the story in general. The reason for the 4-stars instead of 5, however, is the author's lack of proper punctuation. There are a great deal of run on sentences, and not nearly enough punctuation to even everything out. It's like the difference between saying "Let's go eat Grandma!" and "Let's go eat, Grandma!" As far as I'm concerned, the errors severely break the immersion, to the point where this story is more of a "sometimes" story, rather than an "all the time" story. Other than that, though, I love it :)

Don't stop me....i'm pouring all my stones here!Don't you dare!.....................................................................................................................................

Hi ,This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your “Rise of Humanity”, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via [email protected], then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story.SincerelyTynan

The story has some great potential to actually work, not gonna lie. The MC is understandable and is fleshed out and not rushed in any way.      

Not bad. Eh... there are a lot of stuff from other similar books: beautiful police woman, pure girl next door, book that he read and know medicine and so on and so on, but in compare with other crap books not bad

"Why did you thank them? It's obvious they intended to harm you?" Probe Shiela.

Then...he attacks....

"Two days?!! B-but..." I don't know what to say… How will he survive, what will he do, why does he needs to go… but I can't say anything right now, or rather, the words are stuck in my throat… My baby brother is going away…. I feel my eyes burning, but I won't let the tears flow! No way! I can't do that!

Mariam tumhe samjh nahi a raha

'That conniving woman, I knew that she's only using Mr. Hiromi for something again.' Reagan thought.

History: Yuuichi was about to die but he was saved by a girl call Galaxy, however was it a blessing or not one? But anyhow, Yuuichi is trying to master this unknown power and well he do it? will he find out where it came from? Only time can tell.