Valhalla no Ban Gohan - Reviews

On 127 a lot of useless information is given like stat, abilitiess and other things that are not important to the story because they are never used. Battles are just text with saying they died or it is going to be a hard fight then go to the end. No really writing skills just a very basic story with a lot of rubbish information just to make the word count bigger.

What is up with this MC? does he like getting tricked, lied to, pushed around, and threatened by women? every woman he meets, he just gives up everything...this is kind of pathetic. I don't understand why most MCs in these type of novels are like this...smh...

anyone has raws?

Should harm your A.S.S what a lame reason for not telling him the past. If you know the past they will harm you... who?  You can’t know they will harm you..... rlySorry but this is so off and so stupid.

The plot is very intriguing. I like how it started. It shows the author's writing style and imagination. I highly recommend this to anyone who are into this genre :D Great job author-nim :D

Overall, a very good novel.There’s a nice ratio of serious and lewd chapters, the characters are well-developed, serious thought went into the world design and organizations, and there’s a constant desire to read the next chapter.There are the occasional word-choice errors (scoffed used in lieu of scarfed regarding food is one semi-frequent mistake), but they’re few and far between.

Sounds like cultivation chat group, red packet server, and red envelope group of the three realms. its an interesting premise for a story if done well though.

it is really a pity that the story does not continue.  it had a lot of potential and so far the story has gone well and I liked it a lot.  I hope reading the various comments in your story would continue it because it was really good

The characters are totally unrealistic. I mean, every single one. MC saw his power used in the most sensible and correct way, decides to use it in the most silly way. Female lead hates murder and even seeing people hurt. The MC comes along, kidnaps her and forces her to kill people. She went along with the whole situation like nothing happened and even falls head over heels for him.... His parents are also uses, it would have been better if he was an orphan; seeing as they had no presence and were totally useless. Author also places dialogue wrongly; therefore the whole story flow is bad ( He would put it before a long set of actions, so the dialogue just feels out of place, while the reading what happens later is already ruined because you already created an image of what you thought happened.)

I'm waiting for the story to be more developt before making my review but I really enjoy it so what the h*ll. I love the story, I like the development, the world background. If the updates can became like 14 a week it will be great.

This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

She let out another sigh and said, "This has got to be the weirdest night so far for this year."