Unheartly Eating the Hell Fruit

Hm. I have read several chapters from the beginning and I can say that it is a great story that is easy to follow and understand. I can only say that you did a good job :D

Not bad, not bad at all. Not the greatest but it's readable. The writing quality is good but the word "That" is frequently used. It's cliche, to be honest.

The mc's name starts with Lin, what else am I supposed to say??fillllllllllllllllelelelrlrlelelelleleleleleleleldleleleleldlldldldldldldldl

This is the first YA romance I've met where the obvious high intelligence of the main characters is a major factor. They're not nerdy so much as they're dedicated. Their emotional involvement and development has stuttered at times, but they're turning out beautifully. They've managed to impress professors at college even before they've been admitted. They're concerned with family and doing the right things by them. They're just so stinkin' admirable, and I love it.

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Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry.