Ultimate Percy Jackson - Reviews

Author your novel is really interesting....................and that'why i give you five Stars.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

too much blatent plot armor and occassional inconsistencies that break immersion. MC leaves his overseer for loli as new overseer who was conveniently deaged by a material or skill or something which is wrong in many ways.

I enjoyed reading it, author. Hope you won't drop this story. It's well-written and engaging, so just wait for some time and I'm sure people will discover this gem. :-)Keep the good work btw!

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This story’s world looked really interesting, but then the author decided to ’rush’ through it and made everything he was building for around 160~ chapters crumble as he put in a random ‘plot twist’ retconned his whole world he was building with a multiverse plot line rushed ending.The story before it was rushed ending, looked to be built up to be a large and long plot that was generally intriguing, but alas the author either got bored or just decided it was time to end it.

he’s a rock and i like roch and apparently he’s a smart rock now so i like him even more and then he became a very big brain rock so 5 stars

ok, why does all the characters have white hair besides that good story

As they began to shout at one another I sneaked away. I walked for awhile until I came to a door. Trash room read across the top. I smiled. 'This was it!' I walked up to the door.

"Well as Jamie must have told you, I write for the school newspaper and Sally my editor believes that I should write a piece on you since you are the guy that's on everyone's mind. She thinks you are a mystery and she wants me to uncover you" Kat explained.

Wait… I asked for his number? Is this Mr. Long's coveted nephew?

On another hand, she slept quite well without even noticing the intruder.

*Tempered Body* (1-3)