Take the hilarity of a comedy novel, mod it with a sexy R18 novel, and add in a cultivation system. The result you get is a grade A novel worth every second you spend on it.
I read 20 chapters, and it's boring, the MC is a soldier by all means (slave) he follows all orders from the system without asking, there is no intelligence collecting, the first thing he does is to accept a mission to hunt goblins and he acceptes being in another world very fast without even questioning it.
Great Work! Overall Writing is good with no grammatical mistakes and smooth English sentences which are easy to understand, The plot is interesting and well written without any chaotic dialect which made this novel even more extraordinary so keep it up brother!
Love the character very much at the same time story line very interesting. So please, update more. Cant wait for any longer cause its to good. Please have some mercy to all loyal readers like me ????
I lunged forward with my shout, attempting to end it with one blow. The sword came whistling down with my in- step, like a well machine. I was inwardly surprised at my practiced movements, but that introspection didn't last long as another chill swept over me.
Today, Long Yuan'an was told by his father to have a rest from his training. It was because Long Tianyue had something to do and went out with Huang Feiyun. The exact sentence was: "I've been training you for almost a month. I miss the world of two people with my wife. You're going to look after the house today."
