Tyan - Reviews

This book is so amazing and suspenseful, please updateeeeeee!!!!!

If you want a story that makes sense leave. one moment it says naruto have kage level chakra then the Next it says he has jonin level. also even though naruto has sage body he still needs the summons locations to become a sage. Mc also Unlocks his sharingan by just pushing chakra In his eyes( not activate he unlocks it) and its never explained how. this is just a bit i got from the first 5 chapters so read this if you arnt going to pay attention to it.

Cuckold trash. MC actually takes back the thot that betrayed him just disgusting. This will be deleted anyways.............................

After 650+ chapters I'm back to give another review. ~Mc isn't stupid, he doesn't chase skirts like most of the Cultivation novel MC's. He is hardworking, shameless, shows kindness and doesn't show mercy to his enemies. ~Side characters who's their own problems and life. They are not there to only shine the MC but they are flesh out characters who has their own uniqueness.Character development is really good. ~World building is also a strong point of the novel. There are another world's ready to be explored, there are multiple continents with their own uniqueness. And you can expect much more in the future. ~ Enemies are strong, really strong with great backgrounds and has massive armies. There are more than couple of enemies that MC has to face before continuing his journey. One more powerful than the other. ~Battle scenes are really good. It takes his intelligence as well his strength to come out on the positive side of the battles.~English is the the best but it's not the worst either with few grammatical errors. ~Romance has potential. Trust me on this but i see that author knows his stuff and you can expect a gradual building relationship between characters. ~It is a well paced story neither slow nor fast. ~MC has his plot armor but that will not make him OP,  though it will give him an immense potential on his journey to the top.He isn't seeking strength for some b*lls**t reasons but to save his life and the lives of his subordinates. ~MC is not omnipotent he will make mistakes, he has his own flaws. But let me remind you without flaws there will be a limited space for character growth.Overall a very good gem of a novel.If you've read this far that give it a try you'll surely love it.

Me gustó la novela, pero aveces salta mucho en los hechos y hay que releerlo para comprender bien algunos hechos, ojala suban los siguientes capítulos pronto

After 50+ chapters (yes..raws) I've read enough to classify this one into the "white rice" category. It may kill your reading hunger, but it's so darn bland... The MCs cheat can help him find treasures, identify pet potential and evolve his beasts towards a special path, but the writer makes sure he can't completely abuse it.For example, treasures in the wild are usually protected by strong beasts, in the city, most of them have been identified before, so he can only find a few opportunities. If the beast is stronger than the master, it can revolt and cancel the contract, etc. Overall, you get a more mature P0kemon with a MC that will always be above his peers, but not ridiculously so. It's a middle of the pack story...no huge flaws, but also nothing to grab your attention.

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can't believe it's a first time author very well developed world characters and power system keep it up, its my daily read now so in the future i may even get some priv chappys!

Better than a lot of “books” on here! Thank you

this story is now among my top 5, top 3 even if it has more chapters, in just words the story is beyond

"...and then your brain will melt, oozing out of your nose. YOUR NOSE! So let me down, damn it!"