The story was nice...The ML has a very good moral character and I like the fact that he made time to be with his family especially his little sister, the moments of them eating ice cream was a joy to read...
Oh no!I even forgot give a review due to the intense concentration i have reading from chapter 1 to 200+.I can only use a phrase to describe this novelEmbodiment of creativity
Hey started reading a little while ago and the novel is great so far and I'm really enjoying it. (I don't wright reviews so im bad at them)Anyway, one question does the mc stay as a female or not, or is just a mental state that is male and the rest female.
Overall the writing quality is decent and simplistic. Easy on the eyes and I'm not forcing myself to understand.I can tell the development is gonna be good for this one here but instead of telling what the story is gonna be about in the authors comment just let the flow happen and allow the story to take place instead of forcing what it's gonna be about. The readers are gonna want to figure it out for themselves. I'd say that's my one issue thus far so keep up the splendid writing my friend!
This novel started strong. While there were some parts I feel could have been explored a bit more, pacing was fine too. however, when the author started to copypaste half of previous chapters, continuity and readability broke.
