I'm all caught up now at chapter 315, and could not put down this novel when I was reading it. I really love how Jaya is developing and it's reallly cool when he meets these past superstars and becomes close friends with them like with Kawhi.Please come back soon author! We miss you ?
This thing right here, this novel the author made, this friccing guy made a good novel and no one notices it while some random dude wrote a novel full of normal cliché and tropes and get like 1000+ power stones like bro
This is one of the best Storys i have ever read on this app. The characters feel so genuine and refreshing its honestly amazing. The balance between the 2 protagonists characters and there romance is written to absolute perfection My only point of criticism would be this story would really profit from a bit of proove reading. Dont get me wrong it is by no means badly written, its just that sometimes there is a word too much or a Word missing etc. doesnt really effect the reading in any dramatic way tho.
This novel is similar to many already posted long ago on this platform i don't want to be rude to any readers and publishers, but all they did was change all of the characters names. The plot is basically the same and everything like many others have said this novel is a knockoff of another.
50 chapters inno problems with the writing easy to read and the mistakes there is aren't a big deal as there not often. Over all the story is fine but at same time many forced situations and from my initial thoughts on what the story would be from the description of a mc that has to pave his own way in cultivation no matter how stacked against the odds thing are against him with his background and cultivation talent have to say he's had things being pretty convient the whole time. For some reason author has made the concept of strength a cultivator should have at each stage come off pointless. Just makes everything seem completely forced when you have the mc who still at the first tier in cukvation being able to inflict wounds or now even kill someone multiple tiers above his level. Even if the excuse is they were tired I don't see it working why because even a tired body builder is still going to be stronger then a average person, a tired long distance runner is still going to be able to out run a average person. Let alone people that should be hundreds of times stronger then the mc and having abilities like spiritual sense and experienced many years of battle compared to the mc who's still new to all of this. World background honestly is lack luster I don't expect to know of higher worlds or other kingdoms by now but at least give the places the mc is at sense of existence. Descriptions on the size of the location, what's there what it looks like and the people and what there doing. This is good filler and at same time as long as done right meaning full filler because it fleshes out the world the mc is at. The Author deserves praise on the upload rate very rare see a author put out 14 chapters a week when so many struggle to just put out 1.
Stuff you are looking for is good....but story is about a irresponsible rapist who is always insecure...Details:1. He fucks/rapes women here and there and leaves them2. He doesn't think before he acts, and acts in the dumbest way possible3. He lacks character to be a hero or a villian
Seems pretty good so far. hopefully it continues after the writing contest is over but i can understand if its dropped considering your still working on your other book As wellPs: make sure to take plenty of breaks in between writing. i would hate to see you burn out or start to fell stressed like some other authors have. Thanks for the novel author?
You know how it goes. The author reviews his own novel to add more info to the novel for those who come across this novel and want to look at the reviews first. I don't have anything to say other than to just read it. Trust me, you'll like it.
Easily one of my favorite new novels on the site/app. Great characters and it has a very strong start that keeps you wanting more and more. The writing quality and overall theme reminds me of something that MLB would write. MC needs to conquer witches to get more power...if you know what I mean ? MC is almost like a spiritual successor of Su Yang from dual cultivation. MC also has a system but it isn't stupidly overpowered and serves as a guide for him to grow on his own. I believe the system doesn't give him power that he didn't have..but unlocks the potential that was already there. So he won't be able to fight end game characters or monsters right off the bat.
