To Keep a Kitsune - Reviews

I'm loving the synopsis, sounds super interesting... Gonna add it to my library right away

Great cover! it instantly hooked me for the story. And so far writing quality is very good!as for what should be improved. the synopsis... its a mess. I'm my opinion you should properly arrange it. Also after reading some chapters I noticed some of your sentences were too long. don't be afraid to go on to the next line. Also am very doubtful about your chapter names(perhaps make them a bit shorter?)

Well the mc doesn't have a cheat from the start,the story is well developed.The mc suffered losses sometimes but learns from them.The main character when he didn't have a cheat focused on what he was good in rather than cultivation which he had a weak talent in the beginning and reached a high level in the subjects that he focused on.

Finally, no more where the MC try to regain his human form because his a monster. The MC is cunning and smart, he know how to adapt to the situation his in.

More!!!!!!!!! I love this novel so much!!!!!

The novel is going great so far, I love how the God of War didn't fully take over Li Chen's life. the conflict between the two is what I am here for. can't to see what happens as the story unfold.

I've read over a hundred chapters of this novel now. This is the type of monster MC you would either adore or hate. Why do I say this? This protagonist never truly becomes a dragon, at heart or soul, he will always be human. You could see this from each and every one of his interactions with sentient species; every time he inflicts harm upon them he would wallow in self-pity, guilt and philosophical debates (on the universe, life and death) for chapters on end. There's no growth to him as a dragon, whilst his power grows, his personality stays just as it was in chapter 1. Him living for years as a dragon doesn't change him a bit...which I find extremely disappointing.

"Why are you here champion of Athena? Last I knew you faithfully served the king of Heliantis, now he is dead and a mere handful of months later you arrive on my doorstep promising servitude." The scarred man, Alex, looked up at the portly king in front of him and said,

Before she left her home with the elder hunter and Mr. Nate, she told Artemis a few things about what the women in her village were like. She also convinced Artemis to let her hair down from its high ponytail hold. All the women in their village had long hair, which hanged down over their shoulders and backs. With her current appearance, she now looked as if she really was a women from their village.

Kanno is currently working at CEO Michiko Matsuda.  Right now Asako is married and has children named Shuji and Shinji.  Shuji is 15 years old and Shinji is 12 years old.  Ari also has a child named Soji, Soji is now 6 years old.  Rin already has a child named Sora, and he is 7 years old, while Mio has a child named Satomi who is now 8 years old.  Rina also has a child named Ayuko, now she is 6 years old and Yuni also has a child named Oki and she is now 9 years old.  Yuki has a child named Satoshi and he is 8 years old.  Yuko has twins named Nami and Nobuo, Nami and Nobuo, 11 years old, while Jimi has a child named Keiko and Keizi, Keiko is 14 years old and Keizi is 12 years old.  Arata already has a child named Yoko and he is now 6 years old.  Keiji is now 19 years old and he is currently studying at Tokyo University and he is taking the Department of Law and Nara is now Class 7 and he is currently attending Shōtō Junior High School.  Now Nara is 13 years old.

" now I need a sword " saying that Shane stood up and left the throne room and headed to the imperial treasury .

"Hmm… Tamriel, stay behind with my people, I will call for your help when I am sure that we are safe." The Supreme Deity ordered.