Thunder god - Reviews

Of course I'm shamelessly giving myself five stars. Don't mind me. Crime + Murder Mystery + Horror Is the plan, this is a big shift from my usual stuff so we will see how it goes. This has been on my list of potential ideas forever, even before I thought of my other books. I have a bunch of chapters written up already so I'm gonna have a stab at it.

Hey, Reaper here, its one of my starting novel, so there may be some mistakes here and there, pls comment for it, and enjoy the book. Your reviews are most welcome

Great read, well worth the time. Fast paced, action story right out of the gate! Loved the card tricks! Characters are likeable. Great use of description whilst continuing the flow of the story. Everything was geared towards that fast pace set in the beginning with a great hook.

Is not bad, the story that MC can download cultivation techniques and talents of anyone as long as they are in range of system.  It just too bad i didnt see anything worth it in long run while reading this novel, same plot till the end pretty sure

i enjoy the flow of the novel and the route the storyline takes. the character's development is something so important in a novel and you've executed that so well and I really admire the writing style as well.

This story is very interesting and it got me hooked up instantly. The plot was unique and immediately piqued my interest. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it. The author did a great job in describing scenarios. All in all, the author did a great job, and looking forward to reading more.

But, Hold had felt that Lucci would soon surpass him.

"What happened?"

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"Lets go lauren ask him his number you're the prettier one between us (I don't agree though)"

"Are you sure?" he perplexed.

"Darned good a time as any!" The receptionist whistled, "I'll have Kelly escort you to his room."