The Troll-System... In The Bronze Age - Reviews

MC is very ‘Mary Sue’ with zero flaws, invincible in all fights, adored by women (while others regret that they didn’t treat him better), envied by men, knowledgeable about EVERYTHING etc etc. Mix in casual jingoism/racism/nationalism found in so many Chinese novels and little else. The world is neither new nor interesting and merely exists to have things for the MC to beat up. [I’ve read ALL the translated chapters so this is an informed review.]

Thank you very much, author. This book is very helpful for me who just getting started. I follow the instruction step by step, at least now i'm not strayed anymore. ??

I saw it in the ranking with most chaptersThen started reading it, everything so fast that i finish it already till the last updateSo freaking good novel and I recommend everyone to read this

I like how the novel is going so far. There’s not a lot of novels like this , all the other ones are dropped and never finished so I hope you continue updating . I usually like harem but this is a case where I don’t mind at all that it’s a single pairing , and with his childhood friend. I just hope there’s no cheating and heartbreak later down the line...

(As of chapter 58)Writing Quality (3) - there are may grammatical errors, wrong spelling and horrible sentence structure. The style of the author does not resonate with thus it always break my immersion with. You need to edit the early chapters author-nim. Story Development (4) - first time seeing a urban cultivation novel that I really like the progression of the story amaze me to this point. It is not slow in my opinion (I like slow novels with steady power ups) and it is not a fast paced story too. The plot and turning points is reasonable in my opinion for it has reasons on why did he do that? What would he get from doing that action? And many more.Character Design (4) - The character of the story at first is emotional but as that sin worm crawled out form his mouth(I think?) he regains his emotion. Its refreshing to see him ge frustrated about something and thinks about something not in a rational way.Update stability (5) - Well I'm just catching up and it has a 300+ chapters and I'm a slow reader because I read the novel in detail so it will be long way to go before I catch up.World building (5) - well the author has great ideas for his world and has introduce us a plenty of superpowers in the world that the MC is residing in.Thought- overall a great story. Had a bad writing but it can be fixed. One of the best urban novels that I read and I hope it will stay the same(the only novel that I read in urban genre is this hihi). The pace of the story is OK for me and the character development for me is a bit sudden but still bearable. And I think that's it. Good job Author a good novel this is(I know it's grammatically wrong).

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honestly couldn't tell if I even liked the story as they were only three short chapters available to read and chapters 4 through 25 are paywalled by Amazon. which is stupid as most cultivation novel readers don't even know whether they like a cultivation novel until somewhere between chapter 15 and 30 and that's dependent on other factors such as the length of chapters and how much content was in those chapters. so those are key chapters to hooking in new readers to support you on your patreon or whether they want to read more and by the book off Amazon. your marketing strategy is stupid as you don't show enough content to actually hook in new readers to want to buy it.

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I love the book the mc is not an arrogant little ass who keeps offending every one he sees and does not forgive a women just because she is pretty. It’s very refreshing to see the mc be calm and ruthless and be dumb stupid and arrogant

История хорошая спасибо!!!было бы более здорово если обновление было бы часто. Я только сегодня начал читать если обновления часто или недавно загрузили свою работу то тогда извините и все!!!!.

Ok overall. The author does not put himself in the seat of the reader so it's lead to a lot BUT a Lot of incomprehensions and make you feel that the Mc have lost a bit of his brain.

"RJ sir, have a seat " that Chief said.