The Tower Sage - Reviews

Man, I came over your story by chance.  I read a  chapter 1 and I'm half with him .. so I hope to continue, I will put your story in the library...

A moving novel. The characters are well defined. The scenes are sometimes over presented. The same to the cruelty Rishika has to go through, But a good story, all in all. Not to mention, what a parental carelessness, questionable brotherly love!

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I love this story. Escpeically since aarin is so frwaking clever to trick older more experienced  (in the current world) into things that they didnt even think to comprenhend. Im dying of laughter. Keep up the good work

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Well, I deleted my previous review because of two important things. My update schedule will be every day at 20:30 GMT+7 until further notice.The second point is that I didn't give my novel 5 stars and that is blasphemy, Why did you just think I'm shameless? I'm not, I totally didn't feel envious of all the other authors that do the same.  Finally, I'm writing this novel for fun (at least currently)! Moreover, it is my first time writing anything. If that was not enough, English is not my first language. But don't worry! I'm using two different grammar correcting software! So, it shouldn't be bad, I hope you don't leave because of this. I hope I didn't forget anything... I actually did! Any questions or suggestions about the novel write below. I will answer all of them unless they are nonsense of course. And please refrain from using swear words. If you don't like something about my novel, tell me normally. I only have the outline of the plot and some stacked chapters so changing things is possible!

"And what that might be?"

Shirou was a weapon.

          The next day, I decided to leave. They could finish our project even if I left besides it's almost done. I was packing my things when someone knocked at my door. For a while, I stopped and walked towards the door and opened it. I was greeted by his handsome smiling face but after sometime he frowned and looked intently at me. I slightly bowed my head to hide my face. I'm not sure if I successfully hide my soaring eyes to him. I guess not, because he reached out a hand to hold me at my chin so he could have a clear view of my face. Then, he knotted his forehead as his eyes narrowed sensing that something is different in me.

The shepherd sat close to his sheeps near the camp fire, he took out some jerky from his sack, and offered it to Ariden, who sat infront of him. "Thank you, young Vran. Why are you generous with a stanger, who is armed at that" Ariden had recieved the jerky from the shepherd and was looking at him. "Where I am from, we are taught that helping someone in need will bring you luck, and honor to your family" The shepherd laughed "I never thought I would one day help someone who got lost inside the Ghost Meadow, did you really not encountered ghosts while you were there?"

So, that's about it, I hope that many people will read this and stop brainlessly hating on characters without thinking everything through. Because that is the reason, at least for me, why I have almost abandoned the comment section of this novel since every second comment is about how hateful of a character Zhao Yanzi is, and that is really annoying.

"eh. Anni but whay happens if he saw us later?he is at same school like us? "