The Symphire Clan - Reviews

i love this novel... being a strong bodyguard and assassin.. i just wonder who will end up with Lin Yi....Not less than five girls is sure a Headache

.The Author is back with another work again! First of all, I would like to commend the interesting character introductions. It's impressive and easy to understand. The quality of the chapters does not disappoint but rather it will make you want to read more. Even though it has only 10 chapters, I can definitely say that this novel has potential. So what are you waiting for? Go and give it a try!

It has some glaring weaknesses such as too many names and pwer ups thus reducng the quality of the story.I suggest a rewrite it wll fef up your game

looking on the bright side, I managed to read up to chapter 12, anything beyond that I would become an amoeba..............................................

why does he bring the weak girls with him

MC is stupid, it could be good except that he focuses on brain and directly improves brain power. MC is way OP. never met anything that is a challenge.The writing is barely readable and in some cases needs a few seconds of interpretation after reading a sentence.I give up on this book

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[Wait!] I screamed,  not comprehending what Was going on..." could this be an illusion?"

It was a thin face that the water showed me. A skinny face with freckles covering the entirety of the nose and cheek areas, and fire red hair flowing down my left shoulder in an unkempt braid. The eyes were the shade of grasslands, the nose was long but thin, and my mouth was petite, not for kissing, Hawk had informed me, not that I'd like to kiss him anyways.

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I missed this story

"Is there a way to prevent that? I don't want you to snap and kill me when I'm doing the grocery."