The Rise Of The Baron Bladebreaker - Reviews

Did not bother reading past 2 chapters.  Translation is terrible  can't even call it as translation.

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Well The Writing Quality Is Good, There Is Room For Story Development.Author can Try To liven Up Characters By Emphasizing More On Emotional Aspect as well as their featured.The Most Promising Thing, Is World Background. Which Author Can Further Improvised To Inter-Galatic Wars or more As Author may see fit, As There will be different species in future author can I have our MC s*x With Inter-species.Well Author May Need To First As Public Opinion As There May Not Be Many People Who are Interested In Such Kinky Stuff...Well Last But Not Least It Has Room For Growth But The Book Has Not Been Updated For Probably 5 Months So I Gave 1 Star If Possible I won't give a starI ain't Stingy, But Yeah If You Dropped This Please Mentioned It So Others May Not Get Their Hopes Irked Upon This Story .I Will Change This Review After Author Has Upoladed Enough Chapters For Further Assessment Thank You ❤️

Actually a pretty solid novel. Synopsis seems cringe, but I recommend reading it. Reminds me a bit of LOTM, and there are no real cliche tropes so far. The POV switch is a little jagged sometimes, but this sis till better then 99% of the stuff on this platform.

Great novel! I normally don't like sci-fi stuff but this was written really well. I love the story development and the description. Would definitely recommend to others.

Good, but expecting more, I think author should release 2 chapter per day, very interesting story all the best, bring more character so that the story is interesting, tell about farzana allahamahut alban, so it will be more interesting

Superb and thrilling story line that's enough to make anyone's day when he's getting bored. Looking forward to get more and more....Best of luck

"So you can certainly take credit for that suggestion of yours."

Me:well I was gonna say husband but looks like I slept for to long for anyone to care

Ma Sa was simply unable to contain his laughter when he caught sight of his spherical follower tottering along behind him on her stick thin legs. She was startled by the man-cub's explosive laughter but, upon realizing that it was directed at her, threw it a resentful glare. It was only now that she felt the discomfort that accompanied her abnormally distended abdomen. Perhaps she had gone a bit overboard but those 'steaks' were really too good... This was all the man-cubs fault in the first place!

"Can you at least tell me anything useful, anything at all that will help me at this moment?"

in which two students who can't stand one another wake up hungover & handcuffed to each other with the key nowhere to be found.