The New Emperor - Reviews

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I’m quite sad it’s over and the end is too rushed, but what a masterpiece

Very nice! The chapters are nice and long, and full of great descriptive detail that makes this story a pleasure to read. I love the plot, especially with the idea of restarting a life after a tragedy has occurred. The characters are well fleshed out, though I would maybe like to see a bit more detail in their personality here and there. I think the one thing the author needs to work on is being careful not to switch tenses. There were several occasions that the tenses shifted, and a few grammatical errors, but these can easily be fixed.Great work author

another check in novel, not that i mind but it's worse. feels like this is the novel that will lead mark the downgrade of check in novels..

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"Sorry to interrupt your conversation, but it was very rude to pop up in some other pirate ship without permission," Marco said to the boy.

Auria giggles "No matter what you are still only than me by a lot Uncle~!"

Vanessa:pwede ba umalis ka sa daraanan ko-_-

Sigh... I glanced at Damien I could hear the snickers of Jellad and Davy. While they were not sending them in my direction, I couldn't miss their thoughts even If we had no mind link with each other.

Pansear was sent flying to the nearby rock, which he destroyed with his own body. When the cloud of dust, lifted by Pansear, disappeared, everyone could see a barely standing pokémon.

Months are running, another disaster brought to the world. The closest point of our planet to the sun is called Aphelion, but this is different. Our planet surpassed the aphelion point which brought dry land and increase water shortage. Many people died from diseases. The abnormal aphelion is still unexplainable.

Mana to use: 8000