The Master's addiction - Reviews

This story is very enjoyable to read. I really like vrmmo novels and this is something different and I can't wait to read more of it.Keep up the good work author and keep writing.   =^-^=

I was just trial reading this story and got hooked. I get why it's a bit slow, wouldn't change a thing tho as I know it will break the flow. There are a bit of grammar error but very few. Quite impressed with the kinda aesthetic story. Be careful to new readers who do not like thriller, this is more leaning towards thriller for the first 80 chaps. Wanted to read more but I'm out of stones. sigh.  Oh and can you kindly rephrase or at least reduce the amount of 'When I get out of here, I'm gonna find those bastards..' (not exact words but you get what I mean) part cuz it's more repetitive than I thought. You did great otherwise! Thank you Author.

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"Lusamine dont make me regret my decision" I reply with a threatening look

"By going to grandpa's Wizard Tower. My family has the largest collection of magical fluctuations in the world. And a device made my Merlin himself that reads it."

Abilities: [Word Magic]☆, [Space-Time Magic]☆

In his office, he sat down and began to work.

Nie Yu's eyebrows rose before they furrowed as she seemingly began to think about something. Her cheeks got a little red as she refused to look at him.

Dia tidak terkejut bahwa pria itu segera terbangun dekat dalam menanggapi.Dia mungkin menyembunyikannya dengan baik tetapi obsesinya yang sudah berurat-berakar dengan payudara dan pantang panjangnya bekerja melawan individu yang dikendalikannya, yang sering dia gambarkan.

-Level: 4(60/230)

"I spoke to an old friend in the academy when I got your transfer orders and I'm not happy with what I was told. Your training program is brutal and scaring, I don't want a violent wild card in my crew, especially one that I must send to away missions. So what should we do?"

I like Super Sentai than Madan-Senki- Ryukendo, Power Rangers because Super Sentai will have dance in the end of each episode of Gatchaman anime, Super Sentai and Super Sentai have a lot of comedy than the America version of Super Sentai (Power Rangers).