The Lost Destiny - Reviews

Pretty enough.

MC is very naive be you can see the development and the progress he makes to improve only himself but to help those close to him although I personally would like a bit more chapters with his relationships with his loved one (female and male friends )

Although this is my first novel ever written on here, I believe I have outdone myself so far. Its definitely nowhere near the best; however, it has gone farther than I expected it to be. I still have plenty of ideas and many more chapters to come! If you’d like to tell me something that I can improve on in future chapters, please let me know by leaving a review below!Thanks!

"Gad-dam**t Mel, it's about time you wake up. It's almost time for lunch!" (Chai)

I like the New novel idea

With that combo, Sturdy Maple was dead in just 2 seconds. He was able to cast another Fireball but it was cancelled due to the chain of attacks. Thorns Abound needed one more second to cast another Fireball but Stephen was already few steps away from the archer's back. Thorns Abound is afraid that Fireball would hit his ally instead of the enemy.

"Right… I only got your name." Jack laughed to himself before tilting his head to the side slightly. "Jack. Jack Strider." He introduced himself, whether or not he had already done so before he didn't care.

Elijah : Should I help?

I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed

Pertamax ??? Thanks for the Books!!!!! ? ??Oh, nobody have given a review for this yet? Let me be the first to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book ????? We are all looking forward for the next chapters ???

Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?