Reading this novel like enjoying a nice slow dance ? Two geniuses working together and slowly coming closer together. The author is generous by giving us as much factual info as possible while keeping the read fun. Highly recommended??????????
You should definitely give this book a chance. The writing is strong and clear and it doesn't include a lot errors. The author is active in responding to and liking comments which always feels special. The story has been thought out, and it isn't being done completely on the fly. Take that level of quality, which can be very difficult to find on this app, and give it an interesting plot and decent characters. The characters are all decent and you can remember them. As it goes on they become a little more comfortable. Some of the first conversations might have a been a little trope like. However by the end of the first arc (80 some chapters) they are on their way to having their own voices. The first arc kind of drags on towards the end, but it is really just the set up. We know all the major mechanics, plot threads to be explored, and characters that matter for the near future. The author posts very regularly, so we get something almost every day now that he has found his rhythm. My score isn't the highest, but I'm grading harshly. I read this every day and it's one of my favorites, and one of the only stories I bother reading anymore. If the plot doesn't spiral out of control, then this story will undoubtedly still be awesome a year or two from now. I wouldn't even be mad if he posted a little less frequently, that's how good I think it is. If you read my review, have a nice day and I hope you enjoy the story. Note: As of this review, Shinto (protagonist) hasn't done a lot of supporting. But he'll definitely do more later. He's very early in the game and doesn't have a lot of skills. He hopefully doesn't somehow turn into a summoning dps. If you're still here, you should reply with your main support characters. I like Catherine in vainglory.
Okay, okay. I got it. I'll never really do good in Math. How can i solve this problems? Am i really left behind for all the past lessons? Oh, of course i am. What if you were the one who didn't show up for a week in Math class? You think you could cope up directly? Hell, i'm not Albert Einstein or any other Math geniuses. I only got a great head in music and some of my favorite subject. When it comes to music, it really goes along with me and easy. How i love music is also how i hate Math.
"Sebenarnya, aku berharap mereka membalas pukulanku, lalu aku jatuh pingsan dan kau menyelamatkanku. Tapi tidak satupun dari mereka yang membalas pukulanku."
afterwards, when Dave went out he reminded everyone that dinner was to be on the table by 6:30. right after he left the girls ran to Lana and helped her, the nursed her. after she was better two weeks later Lana came to them, she told them she was pregnant again and that the child survived the beating her husband gave her, the girls then forged a plan. in the middle of the night, they snuck Lana out and into the tree house where she lived the girls brought her food and water and continued to update the tree house. they then continued to hide Lana until the baby was a year old. then they would leave her on the tree house and would come back as much as they could.
The story began in a very interesting manner. The writing style is superb, descriptive but not boring. While you read you can envision the scenes very clearly. That's a big plus for me. Also, the setting is very mysterious, which adds another charm to the story. The author mentioned this will be a long time project. I'm happy for that, so I wish them the best of luck! Keep up the good work!?
The story lacks consistency. The main character spends his resources on those he doesn't even trust yet. He chooses easy mode then wants a challenge. None of it is consistent!
