The Hollow Body - Reviews

Another great story in the making. I can't wait for more updates

I will give this book a Ten-star if it exists… I love this author’s works, keeps me hooked

i like cultivation books and system books most and this is the combination of both.it is a promising book with a lot of adventures and fun. looking forward to it

So, I usually do not even read on this app, I mostly just write because it’s my passion, but I saw this book and it looked really interesting. Welp. It is. I love when writers open up with a strong and impactful chapter right off the boot, and I hate when it’s those basic “my name is so and so and I’m so and so years old and I look like so and so and this is my life” it’s boorish and boring to read. I love when you set the world and describe the looks of characters through the story itself, not just plainly explaining it, and I can say without a doubt, the opening chapter on this book is phenomenal. It sets up the stage and explains what the world is like, what the people live through, how it all began, gets your intrigued with “what the heck did that?” (No spoiler as to what I’m talking about did what) but it is extremely good and a very intriguing plot idea. Stop reading this review and read the story.. don’t waste precious time. This book is worth the read.

This novel was very informative and interesting. I recommend this book to anyone who's really interested with this kind of genre. I promise that you'll enjoy and never regret reading this.

From the title, I think it could be a great story a good idea

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An extremely fun synopsis and premise for a story. Dialogue, grammar, and syntax is excellent. Likeable characters, with a story that immediately  hooks you in. Please keep writing.

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A great story and unique due to the mc not being overpowered and being a teacher. the way magic is implemented is interesting and leads to a lot of interesting applications. I do feel the current arc about learning about and creating a sect due to a missing teaching license a little bit contrived since it doesn't really feel like it would truly be impossible to get a teaching license for the mc, especially with his connections. I think it's somewhat unnecessary but even if still great fun to read, though I find that just giving the mc a teaching license might have been more closely keeping to what the story is especially good at being the mc teaching his students.

"To inquire more information about the system you can just ask."

They again all traveled in silence. It had been that way for most of the trip. The horses started to get antsy. Lei even had to reign their own horse down. Something was off.