The Game Master's Adventure - Reviews

So far so goooooooooood....... But need upgradein on release system.. ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

I loved the story up until it rebooted with no warning

This is a good ass story so far the character is nice but isn't so stupid that he's nice and you can get those vibes from him that he simply enjoys life and wants friends. Please keep the story going author there are so many small stories out there that authors drop but I'd hate to see it happen to this one.

Hi! Author here leaving an honest review.I want to improve my writing because I knew this is mediocre and I want to make it better.I use too much exposition and find that I can’t write good conversations. there will probably be a lot of inconsistencies because as much as I try to note down all of the information that I use (seriously I have like 16 pages of notes for like the first 30-40 chapters) I will inevitably forget something.Pls give your suggestions on how I should improve, I take criticism well so do your worst.(P.S I will write a chapter ever 1-2 weeks and I should have around 2k words per chapter, no promises to either of those though *teehee*)

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"WIND ROCKET!!!"

The 'shock' inscription was only a single one of the 3600 kinds of foundation lines.

She was intending to make a brain map of this palace, "Miss, you are not allowed to cross this door_!!" a guard interrupted her train of thoughts!

So much to do, so much to see

He leaned back and crossed his arms. his broad shoulders were emphasized and that made him look like some wall that can never be destroyed.

Lin Tianlong's hand kneaded Shi Jieyi's breasts and sensed the soft sensation from them. Adding onto that was the way she served him passionately. The flames in his heart flared up just like a campfire which turned into a forest fire. Lin Tianlong also stopped taking things into consideration and pounded her ferociously.

Walking out of his room, he headed to the living room, after asking one of the maids to prepare some food. It didn't take long before some food was brought, and while he was eating. his mind wandered back to the fight that would be happening later that day, as well as the impending invasion of Uzushiogakure.