The Forgotten Souls - Reviews

The Forgotten Souls
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Finally out of the zillion cultivation clones something original. Unique hero, that is powerful but does not feel like he has a plot armor, convincing romance, realistic characters and interactions, a plot that moves on without feeling like the author clones episodes (looking at you library of heavens path). Defiantly, something better then most of the offers out there.
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Being an avid reader on this platform, and video games being one of my favorite genres, I do have to say that is is one of the better books here. The pros: the world background, and the characters are quite nicely developed. Although the reincarnation trait is very overused, it is implelemted nicely in this book. Another thing is that the game also has solid mechanics, no logic holes in it, at least none that are huge. Cons: the start of the book is rather slow and chaotic, and might be hard to push through. There are small grammatical errors, and some logic holes. However, none of the cons are very large. In summary, this is a rather good book, I encourage you to read it, and I encourage the author to continue writing and updating this story.
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Sky! Sky! Sky! Sky! Sky! Sky! - Clearly the best girl by far.Although my issue with her is that she seems too good to be true. Too good to be true characters undoubtly always have something that is later revealed to go "Ah, I knew she was too good to be true." Which would make it so the MC doesn't take the final gap into accepting her, causing drama.  What do you think Author? There's no way Sky wins so easily despite how perfect she is as a yandere. Too predictable! Emma is pretty interesting and if the author takes her route it can be really amazing or at least for development. From a complete stuck-up, privileged sociopath to someone who completely reforms and understands her sins. Not asking for a complete reform, but she has some much potential to make it so that she becomes a very likable as a character.As for Ashly.... yeah um.... yeah uh... anyone but her please. I really hope you don't turn the mc into a crazy masochist. From normal conventions, she would be considered the main girl. Plz no no no  no no.Overall- Enjoyable. Nothing amazing, though Emma really could be amazing. It's decent!I hope the author makes it so there would be only 1 winner. As a story about yanderes, it doesn't make sense for such psychopaths to share. So please don't!Keep up the good work!
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Author, I want more.. pronto!!! more.. more.. more.. more.. more..
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yea dead while thinking how to recover backup data urggh ( for some reason my hdd Got infected with some virus i think..well it suck to find new one after all .... anyway it dead now uwuauwuwuwuuwwuuwuwusss7s )dead dead dead dead dead dead dead dead dead dead dead dead well still same after all coz imma keep spam until dead with some dead shet and rash shet uwuwuwwu bored tho
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In a country name Greile there is small city name Drunkard which is ruled by a noble house name Abolon.the house head name is Fillip Abolon who inherited his position from his father Felix Abolon.
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Raditz didn't actually cared, his brother would become an elite warrior and he wanted to be there to help him. The saiyan had always respected power, and as such the most powerful warriors had everything they wanted, money, women, fame....Let's just say that Sarada and Broly wouldn't really miss anything.
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"Human I wills need you to move as this passage is a littles small."
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He yelled while falling on the road and he quickly grabbed his chest to stop the blood flow.

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