The First Thing that Came to mind - Reviews

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pretty goodmade me think I was reading a LOHP fanfiction to be honest. very similar start to LOHP. but can't complain much, quite cliche story and development but I'm quite a bored so might as well read it.

Author: Cuttle Fish that loves DivingLvl of Author: PlatinumNotable Works: Throne of Magical Arcana and Martial Arts MasterWebsite: Qidian CNStatus: CompletedViews: 9.38+ millionRecommendations: 2.72+ millionChapters: 1430+Rating: 9.4/10 by 1317 readersComments/discussion: 2454A Xuanhuan novel by 'Cuttle Fish that loves Diving', what can I say except that I'm looking forward to it..........

Chapters are not in order, genders are not consistent, portion of chapters are pasted into others. Only those of the MTL DAO could enjoy this. It is to bad, because I liked the idea behind this story. But, I read for entertainment, not to solve literary complications.Maybe it gets better past C24. I won't know because there are plenty of other novels that put in the effort to satisfy their readers.

idk this novel has a great potential but the story has many blank page and too fast paced i hope the creator will pay attention to this issue

Gramática de muy alto nivel para una novela sobre Qidian.Y no te tomes esas palabras a la ligera.Cuando estaba leyendo el primer capítulo, lo que mi mente notó fue lo suave que podía leer la novela incluso más que la historia en ese momento.ENTONCES me di cuenta de la historia. El autor obviamente tiene un plan para esto. Incluso fui a deviantart para ver más de cerca el mapa.Si esto da alguna pista, es que puede esperar una historia bien pensada y gramaticalmente buena con una construcción mundial expansiva en el futuro.Incluso considerando los pequeños agujeros de la trama, SÓLO la legibilidad de esta novela le da cinco estrellas. Sigue escribiendo mi hombre, y sigue haciéndolo durante mucho tiempo: D

Although I have not read it yet but already this book is giving me amazing potential vibes I hope this can get at least 100 chapters author I’m looking forward to it!

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Amazing work I must give it to you? I like it very much it is great , can’t wait to read more of your work

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