The First Shot - A Two Worlds Short Story - Reviews

This book is on fire. If you live to read romance sprinkled with mystery and the right kind of suspense. You’re in the right place

too many plot holes. how is it his friends are keepin up with him in lvls...... feels very dull reading vr part. i only was happy to read the irl part of the novel and i dropped it.

looks like it's written by an uneducated bigot

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I think this is a very beautiful universe, and incredibly interesting as well. I was very immersed in the story, but the MC being so edgy keeps making me question if i should continue reading it or not.Good everything, very annoying mc imo.

Not gonna lie, I'm not a huge fan of Dark themes but your story changed my point of view. The story build up had me on the edge of my seat. I loved it and I would recommend it to my friends.

Yeah I'm the author and I'm rating my book now. Really proud of my work check it out and get absorbed by the world ...

up till now it is goodlets wait for more updates

At this point Caly keep on averting his attention from the road to the subject. This was the scene Uno caught.

Sigh... 'my lucky day'

"Are you an idiots? Daring to interrupt my speaking? I am not even finish yet. Did this Queen just say that I would show you the evidence? Are even listening to what I just said? Heh." The imperious Queen said.

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb