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First of all, the translator is doing an amazing job with this novel, even as the author twiddles his thumbs and churns out filler after filler. The updates are consistent, but even the rapid releases aren't able to distract you from this story's failures. Let's descend in order of ratings. The character design is well done- for the main character, that is. It's really endearing to see him grow and steadily exercise more power, considering his *****, pitiful origins. However, his arrogance- or perhaps chuunibyo- is used to awe and inspire those around him, but it most frequently turns into a joke, a poor attempt at comedic relief. Speaking of chuunibyo, there's a heavy Japanese influence in this novel. There's nothing wrong with that, but directly plagiarizing characters from other anime, such as Saber, One-Punch Man and Hellscythe is a sad substitution for actual character development, and really demonstrates the author's lack of originality, which is further exacerbated by his terrible pacing, the overarching flaw that neuters this story's potential for growth.I mentioned that I would descend in order of ratings, but I merely gave character design 2 stars. Why is that? That's because the story doesn't consist of only the main character. The main character has a few potential love interests, and anyone caught up on translated releases will be very familiar with them.Unfortunately, the fatal flaw strikes again. I ask you, readers, after the tower arc, how many of you are still conscious of the supporting characters that were introduced in the first "half" of the novel? Perhaps if you binge read, you might have some semblance of their personalities, but the tower arc, as a means of isolating the elites from the rest of the world, has utterly disconnected the reader from the rest of the world. We're not talking a quick arc either- we're speaking about hundreds of chapters, with maybe 50% of it filler and the author simply bloviating about whatever he wants to extend the word count.Is it strange to consider character interactions as part of the character design category? Honestly, the interactions are consistent, but of course they would be- the author has simply stole premade characters and dropped them into his story. The characters he designed himself are your typical wuxia cultivators. He hasn't just stolen characters either. There's an implicit ridiculousness to this story- if you really think about it, you might become dizzy. For example, don't let it bother you that the main character wields Shu's ability from Guilty Crown, as well as something akin to the eyes of death from Tsukihime, as well as Excalibur from Fate, with another recent addition being the Hulk's physical power up. That our mutated chimera of a character is driven by a ***** personality of straightforward foolhardiness of nigh idiocy is no comfort- his transfer to this world might have neglected parts of his brain.There's not much to say about development- there is practically none after he enters the tower, and what was established before will quickly be forgotten. The author provides random tidbits of history to pad his word count, but instead of explaining the rest of the world besides China, he'll focus on something inconsequential to churn out another filler. Oh? Did I not mention the origin of the title? Don't worry, you won't see much of the "absolute choice" system anyway- it simply acted as a method to introduce comedic relief, but its output was cringe and a prelude to the author's questionable state of mind- honestly, we should've recognized his insensitivity before reading this far.The author alludes to the fact that he recognizes his pacing is messed up, personifying himself into his characters and speaking dialogue that's essentially throwing shade at our "impatience". He has deluded both the readers and himself into believing that his chapters of full of substance and vibrant with content, a false sentiment borne of his arrogance. If you read the comments, you'll get the information you need in 1-3 sentences, as opposed to the author's long winded rambling. Don't have any high hopes for this story- the 4 and 5 star ratings are from an era long past. How can a story reform when the author won't? It is pure idiocy to expect anything from this fool. For the brothers stuck in a limbo of anticipation and then deflation upon seeing a chapter of nonsense, I feel you, and I beseech the newer readers, on the fence- don't read this story.
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I like the story. Sure the grammar needs to be touched up but it is still readable. What gets me is the fact that the mc is so moronic!?? For a so called “#1” player the mc gets enraged by a small slight and that is ok he can get revenge when he gets stronger. The next day he immediately shows hostility and alerts the enemy even when he is far weaker in a lot of aspects. It’s just stupid. Why did I write this again? I don’t want to delete after I put so much time into this. ?u200d♂️
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Novel has already been translated in other websites up to chapter 452 ?                 ???????????????????????????
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Very raw form.                                                              ………………………………………………………………………..:::::::;;:::::::::;;;;;;:::::::
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Story is very lame, slow, and nothing impressive. Dialogue is very verbose, uninteresting, and  unnecessary. The start of the novel kills any enthusiasm to continue reading the story. MC's personality is too ordinary including his intelligence. Only thing that MC has going for him is god-tier luck and even the people around him seem to have it. This novel is literally about you reading about people winning lotteries.
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It's a good read to pass the time, so far MC and other characters are likeable, story line is easy to follow and can't wait to discover more
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[This is brutally honest] Lemme just start this off by saying that Jae Hyun is a SERIOUS Marty Stu (genderbent Mary Sue). I mean, could you do any more godmodding with this dude? He's apparently handsome, intelligent, and is generally flawless, according to the story. You wouldn't want to mess with him in a battle either, even though he has no prior training apart from martial arts!For all of the other characters however, I am IN LOVE with them. They're all so diverse and make for the perfect friend group, not specifically for Jae but just in general. The only complaint I have about the rest of the group is that WHO GIVES SOMEONE NAMED DANIEL THE NICKNAME "Niel"?! Why not a more commonly accepted nickname like "Dan"? I mean, I get that it's a different world and all but come on dude...I'm in love with the setting, like, CAN I STEAL YOUR IDEA OP?! The idea is very well developed and I'd love to learn more about this society. About the story development, however, I'm a bit confused. Wasn't this about Jae Hyun finding his place in a world where music is essentially illegal? What's with all of the underground gang rapes and committing suicide? I suppose this could be an outlet of inspiration for Jae Hyun in the future, but doesn't he already have enough inspiration? He's in an oppressive world he doesn't know and misses his family. I think that was a bit of a cheap trick OP, using sensitive topics to build your plot. Just work with what Jae Hyun has and focus on the main point of this novel.Again, I don't know how light novels work but these are just my opinions as an avid reader and aspiring author. In general I really love this work because it's a refreshing break from the heavy novels I usually read. Kudos to you OP.
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Good Novel worth reading.Now I am Filling up space.Now I am Filling up space.Now I am Filling up space.Now I am Filling up space.Now I am Filling up space.
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Feeling creepy, she quickly switched off the light and left the room.
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bro can you create a novel where a Indian mc is there, because I really want to read novel that, your writing style is awesome, I am following your first novel. I really hope you can write that kind novel.

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