unfortunately like most books this is also not picked up.....,.................................unfortunately like most books this is also not picked up.....,.................................
Very good novel, I personally havent noticed any writing mistakes, the story is developing very well, the chracters are all interesting(imo), and the world background is good.
the gender has been confused a lot the master(girl) why is she called junior uncle?! i remember mc mentioning she has a valiant air but all other charecters talk to her like shes a man?
Her naked body rose from the river as she went over to the sides, drying herself and the clothes that she had just washed... She felt cold from all the bathing that she instinctively rubbed her arms with her hands.