The Beta Girl - Reviews

Enjoyed the book and I love happy endings I know the grammar can be improved however the storyline makes up for it if you persevere

The grammar in this one is not very good. I have read up to chapter 3 and I just can’t continue this with this one. Examples would be lyme use of loose instead of lose. Other examples would be incomplete sentence structures.

This book is good like tour others The Rebel & To Betray the Mafia King
I don't like you book The Girl he Banished & Death wolf. although you make good endings but Love shouldn't be poisonous
& try to change the stories, I can see the similarities in ur books all the time

Your style of writing is amazing. You need to change the clashes between leads from stupid misunderstandings to something that will end up special in 1 or 2 episodes. not long lasting stupid misunderstandings. that was frustrating.
You are good, you can do better. I trust tou

Scar is becoming a very annoying characters. She is acting like a spoiled child. So, he didn't return your LOVE when you were his Beta. Maybe he also didn't know how he felt then.

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Leo find her before they hurt her

Great story, please update

So far, just as amazing as the rest of her stories! Looking forward to when she starts updating on a regular schedule. This new book already seems amazing.

Dear Author, please update episode daily. wait is too long.

good book.....

waiting for the next chapter.