The Alpha Luna - Reviews

I love this book it was ......

good story line although the writing style and editing made it hard to follow sometimes. Lots of short sentences and spelling mistakes which could be improved with better edits. Ending also felt very rushed. Not a bad book but could be improved

I am waiting for the update plz update it

These comments don't feel right 2 of them are just copies

I don't know what to say.....the chapter 2 shocked me to the bone HAHAHAHHAHA wtf bro we just started here OmO. And to say that the mc is the king of every chapters ʕ ꈍᴥꈍʔok

>doesn't show expression
Bro he straight up risk his life for money in stupid situations and there's only so much of that I can read. He has no heart no soul his entire brain is obsessed with money. He's so twisted he barely acts human.

In the orphanage arc he is the most chuunibyou character I have ever seen. Every monologue is insufferable. It's not even "I can't stand this person irl" it's that I can't even stand him as a fictional character because he has the most deranged view I have ever seen.

There was a bug with the update system for this novel and sadly I noticed it too late. Hopefully it has been resolved and it will keep being updated. Also the missing second parts of some chapters added.

Great story line.. never a dull moment ...

koinnya mahallll

Long but so worth the read!

I absolutely love this book I never could put it down