The Airforce - Reviews

This was one of the worst 1rst Chapters I've read in about 60 novels or so. If only the chapter was just boring and the the MC borderline morronic like many other novels.... but no... the author had to go further.. "how could we possibly have something as incredible and mysterious as Math" Good fu.cking luck explaining grades, like having 6/20 or even selling shi.t. No commerce will happen, no numbers, no sharing something between people... Cause we have name for that, it's math, and its science. And we don't do science... *slow clap* "this literature you're talking about is Science, right? Science doesn't exist here" Well, little friend. Playing with words is kinda different than playing with numbers. And if the author wrote on his resume that he was a scientist cause he wrote a novel... that would be very sad. Good luck explaining how people wrote their school books, or even the novels every one knows... because Writing is science.. and we don't do science.. *slow clap* I was so fed up with this chapter early on... and was pushing "one more chapter, the end is soon

I have not given up on this story entirely yet, put I am right on the edge I'm about 25 chapters in and to longer term readers does the writing get any better and do we get some actually character development for anyone other then the protagonist.  The author is also playing kind of fast and loose with deus ex machina does that get any better

heeee  author-san this power stone is definitely not a bribe for more chapters but still don't tell anyone okay  if not then????? goodbye ?

I like how the story isn't flooded with just adding disciples. however, character development is a major weakness

I'm still waiting for "Devil chicken stealer

GIVE ME MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This book is an absolute masterpiece! Every chapter is packed with suspense, and the plot twists are mind-blowing. The characters are so real, and the story kept me on the edge of my seat. The author's ability to control emotions is sheer genius. I couldn't put it down—it's more than a five-star read!

" si mommy lang, si daddy nasa Batangas may project sila duon eh. Baka mamayang gabi pa yun darating."

"Kau tidak mau diam juga?"

She needed to be more careful because in this previous year she was not here in the Royal State and was heedless of the changes that took place here.

And we could all use a little change

So much to do, so much to see