System, WTF! - Reviews

I followed your previous work which was written in Indonesian. Maybe the way of writing is different because of the English language. However, the storyline is still interesting and the pace is better than the previous work. Keep the spirit.

So if give something, you get something in return but better. Then give that thing that you get from giving something to get something even better.

Why hasnt it been shifted to the voting pool even after so many weeks???????????????????????????????¿????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Just loving this novel so far alot of nice stuff and great detail,.................................... . . . . . . . . . .  ..........................................................

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Good storyline!! It's interesting to read, story is moving smooth , although writing quality is also nice but needs some more improvements waiting for more updates , good job keep it up author!!

I like how Clay evolve from being an anti social kind of person to a very sweet and caring person. The plot twist has left me a real good shock.

     "I'd like to be with him always, but I can't. I still have to take care of things at the grocery store." Kyle looked down at the old carpet. His mother was in her seventies and she was still working.

Reddened with rage, Su Heng, the third young master of his family, swept his arm and pointed to the sidewalk. Implying to the large-bellied boy to screw off out of his sight, like he was sick of him.

Turning around I went into a sprint. Looking around the top of the mountain I tried to find a spot to hide. Finding a large rock I bolted behind it. Luckily I made it just in time, seeing as the lion had gotten back onto the mountain peak and was scouring the whole peak looking for me...

"Oh make sure you watch out for the catbrier under the trees. I've been meaning to clear it out, but you know how that goes with me." Mike's dad called out a bit too late to warn the boys.

"Okay then" (Jane) reads the notebook again.