Every chapter was superb until the end. The most important part where Alex should have met him mother and family, his wife meets her in laws, relationship between Cynthia and Her boyfriend.. At last you made the whole story jumble.. I think you should have continued for at least 10 chpt .
Why the heck did all the names start changing in chapters 203/204. It’s confusing since the names are now Chinese version (?) instead of English version used during all earlier chapters.