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Beginning looked quite promising. Then there was that forced cliche and everything became a mess with the sudden changes, broken plot armors, ridiculous power levels. The pacing went all over the place. That said, I have not read further past chapter 40, but what I got there gives me mixed feelings.
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Good day to all my readers, I know my update rate has been disappointing. I know i am disappointed by it toohowever due to certain mistakes i made in this book, i am planning on rewriting it So if you are in favour of me rewriting the story, please comment and if you have any ideas, you would like me to add, please comment as wellthank you
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Lucien regained his calm amongst the three of them as Iroko talked about Prime, he queried, "What do you mean catch her scent? They can track her?"
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'annoying that you only played the game with her in it so we dont know her that well' Eve states
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"Today I have turned 18, it feels like a normal day would to me, I was supposed to go to the Niyt castle as we were going to hold the ancient ceremony to strengthen our powers but all was changed due to that day, father and I are going to go to the forbidden land to go hold a ceremony of our own because I was really looking forward to ascending tonight once the full moon has risen".
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with out warning  he threw the baby up in the air and prepared to slash it  in seconds  minato appeared  in the air and grabbed his son thanks to his teleportation jutsu
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So happy.
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Sampai akhirnya manager itu pergi dan kamipun memutuskan untuk pulang..
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she said and hug Rey more tight
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"Yes, I will. For the sake of blood. Pay me whenever you feel like. But know that I'll demand something of you in the future. I don't know what it would be but everyone has their use and I think one day, you will come in handy."
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The shameless author here ??Writing a review for your book is sort of shameful, so I'll just clarify some things. Oh and by the way, if you have any questions about the novel, you can leave them in the comments!I am more than happy to answer each one of you!!!- "First of all, what is this book about?" Well, It's about a guy named Atenzi who used to live in our planet, but after his death, he was chosen as a wildcard and got sent to another universe called Universe X.To be more precise, he was sent to Naaim, a planet similar to ours, plus some mythological creatures, and historical figures as evil leaders or benevolent wisemen.- "What type of guy is Atenzi?" He is very disciplined but doubts himself a lot.But as the story goes, he trusts himself more.I f I had to define him in a sentence, it would be that he is the definition of the indomitable human spirit.You'll like him, I promise.- "Will he be overpowered?" Yes and no. Sometimes Atenzi can score easy wins, but most of the time, no.He relies immensely on his high IQ/battle IQ, and knowledge from Earth about several martial arts, philosophies, and other things.Yes, he is like a nerd who can fight and has a strong will.- "Will there be romance?" Yes, but it is indirect and very rare.- "Will there be a Harem? Definitely not.- "How often are you updating?" Currently, I'm dedicated to writing two to three chapters every day. - "Why would you rate your book 5 stars huh?"Well, a person has to motivate and encourage himself!If you don't believe in your craft then no one will.I know I am a new author, and I probably make a lot of mistakes when it comes to writing, but I still believe that, story and plot twist-wise, my book is great! It is my first work and definitely not the last one!- Finally, enjoy the novel, and post a review if you can, whether good or bad, it will help me become a better author, a better version of my current self!Yours truly, Innocence.
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10/10 cant wait to see more. Hopefully he keeps writing, I hear he has good stuff planned. Maybe he is even working on it now, dun dun dun….

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