Slaughter System [Hiatus] - Reviews

The story was developing in a good manner but nowadays due to bad update schedule the fun seems to be gone. please make the update schedule regular. been waiting for the chapters for a while

I have never done a review before but holy does this book deserve it.(If I did not need to make sure that it had 140 words spaces and letters this review would have been 69 letters and spaces long)

I'm giving it a 5. The world building is pretty well done. The dilemma is well established. Even the introduction about the gamer powers is decent. I would have liked more of a mention regarding his previous life, still pretty good.

lets see..........................................................................................................................................................

Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

MC and his companions decide to set out to Alchemy City to go and meet the MC's master. You would think that once they get to the city they would be able to find him. NOPE!!! It is a 75+ chapter filler until they finally find him. WTF!!!!!!!!!! Why even state that their main goal is to find his master at the city if it is going to take over 75 chapters to finally find him? The author makes you sit there wondering for over 75 chapters when he is going to finally be able to meet his master once more. The entire time I'm just half a$$ reading this to get past these fillers to find out that it is going to take another 50 chapters, from where I have read up to, to finally meet up with this master once more. I don't even care what is happening in these chapters because the author got my hopes up that he was going to meet his master and start onto the next section of the story plot. This kind of completely detracts from the story when an author gets your hopes up like this and then puts 75+ chapters of filler in.

I don't know how to reach everyone so this seemed fair. Thank you to everyone for the kind words who have read House of Shadow and hopefully will continue to read it. It's greatly appreciated and keeps me going. Thank you!

Senpai, I'll leave you a review. Your work is great and has an anime feel to it like the light animes about friendship and everyday life. Your updating stability is good, I hope you maintain those daily updates haha. Don't get lazy! Continue on fixing your punctuations, I will support you til the end.-Your Kouhai  〜(￣▽￣〜)

Nice grammar and everything else is all perfect, it's alluring and easily gets hooked up, I like its prologue and how the characters are introduced, good work author, and to many more interesting chapters.

intresting i will add this to may library .

Leo inhaled, returning to his calm resolve. "Long enough to realize this is the only course worth taking," he said.

A famous student known as Wang Wushuang was also discarded because of this.