OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,AND SO GOOD,GOod,GOOD,GOOD.More chaps.pls.THIS IS THE BEST!!!!
Okay, let me be honest here. The writing needs a lot of improvement. The sentences are long, and there are a lot of punctuations missing. The tone is straightforward and has little flow.BUT THAT'S THE ONLY BAD PART HERE!!!!If you go beyond the writing quality, you will find an amazing story. The characters and world are well and show's writer's passion on the work. Amazing, keep up the work and keep on improving. :)
MC is too stupid, always doesn't move in team battles..waiting for all his friends to lose and then he fights alone against all enemies..If the MC fight together with his friends, maybe his friends won't get hurt..
you need to do more research, golden core isn't powerful at all. this like first couple of chapters I'd full of you pushing to us that "ohhh ancient sect./ golden core powerhouse" no. golden core middle of the beginning levels its like a small boss that shouldn't fill a couple of pages worth just to push on to the readers "he's strong" lol. but good try.
Best story I've ever read. I love it, tha characters are the best and I love all of them. I recommend this with all my being. I don't know what else to say apart from read this story. The plot can get a tiny bit confusing but it all works out in the end. Anyway enjoy the wholesome gayness
Probably the best novel out of the recent batch. Could be interesting if an actual translator jumps on board but with the MTL translation it's doomed to fail.
The story has reached chapter 850 and the FL has not been chosen yet. I also don't want Esme to be the FL because I don't like elves and she is also annoying to me.
"Nah ... I'm not Writerz, I'm your mama and I wanna to said how disappointed me borned you to this world ... of course I'm Writerz. Now let's we finish this conflict with man way. If you just rely at that stupid gang it's useless. we win the amount."
I forgot to mention to him that she could probably beat up all of her subordinates, even fighting toe to toe with those specializing in close quarters combat. Even has a personal living space with a gym inside her office.
