Reincarnated Vampire Princess and Former Hero, Trample Over Mankind - Reviews

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Super anime. I gave this story a 4 star in everything but stability since it uploads daily a lot. It is cool. At times I was kind of bored? It's long. And slow. But then it will be super fast. I don't know. It has good grammar most of the times. Sometimes it fails at that though. It was good though. I liked it.

Hm, added to the library. If this story disappointed me I will change the rating at least after reading firs hundred chapters. Wait author for my response soon.

Just a simple reviewWriting quality - 5Stability of updating - 5Story development - 5Character design - 5World background - 5This story is different from all the novels i've read.Mc is calm,lazy,smart and antagonist,different from your usual dumb mc.For now he has only one goal which is to find out about his own existence.This is a story that you guys won't regret reading.

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This book seems to have the foundations of a great book but is let down by poor writing. if you want to see what I mean I've left comments in the first chapter. another thing is the way speech is handled, having the name after every speech is disjointing. try to build the speech into the sentences. the name after style could then be used for greater effect in confusing fight scenes or when lots of aside characters are talking. Also in general work on the way you express ideas. eg aghh its my alarm is both a unnatural thing to say and disjointing. instead he jolted awake, realizing the dragon roars were in fact his alarm clock. This only an example, there's many ways to do it but this book has a lot of potential if you go back and rewrite it.

The story is amazing. The interactions between characters is well done and the personalities of each character is well developed. Furthermore, the world building is described in detail. My only problem is that the chapters aren't released often enough. I understand that the chapters are a bit longer but all I want is a chapter released every other day at least. Highly recommended story.

If you want to read this novel these are the things that you should be aware.Misspelling ~ It would have been ok if there were only a few misspelled words but there to many that you would have to reread the sentence to understand it.Grammar ~ Along with misspelled words are sentence that is hard to understand because the grammar is messed up.Fighting Scene ~ Just skip the fight scene. It's like a 3 yrs old kid playing fights with his toys.Story ~ Just give up!And my most hated thing about this novel is:It's Premium ~ I don't know what made the author thinks that this will is worth the premium but for me it's a waste of "Fast Pass". Don't bother spending your FP, if you want to read this novel just wait until it's unlock. It's not worth it!**: this my opinion and Review!!

There's not that many bad things to say about the story just enough to make you stop bothering about it once you reach the last free chapter. The author force a lot of stuff to make the story develops how he want it. The Mc does not reflect the fact that he reincarnated he lives with kids and he is perfectly integrated with them, the author could just have chosen a kid from that world as mc it would have been better.

interesting concept but falls a bit short. I ended up just skimming the chapters at some point since there are a lot of repetetive "he freshend up, ate, and went to sleep. woke up and trained.." repeating.  and it is to slow paced for my taste. dropped when I felt it had been aged since he progressed in any meaningful way and I looked ahead seeing there were still like 30 chapters until his next breakthrough.

It's really good, read it on a whim but it was an unexpected gem, was debating on the rating. The grammar is great, plot is great and characters were great, I say were because...In the beginning you can feel MCs hatred for Anna, you know he hates her, you can feel it even he doesn't say it which it is usually described in internal thoughtsAt around chapter 66ish, I know and appreciate MC can act like he doesn't hate her to take full advantage of her for whatever "evil schemes" she's trying to pull but you no longer feel the hatred, in fact, MC feels a bit complacent, I don't know if it's because there is less of an internal monologue about how much he can't stand her going on but it feels way different, I know Anna said some BS to throw MC off which he fell for and is contemplating but it seems like his hatred is dying down way too quickly, I mean this girl like he said, gave the execution order essentially, his own words, she is responsible for his family's death, his life as a fallen noble, etc, his hatred seems ...shallow at this point is the best I can describe it, it's just different from when we started off and when he was initially actingNow when he says he wants to kill her, it seems more like...what's the phrase....lip service, yea, words without meaningI'm still gonna keep reading of course, it's a great story, just a bit disappointed at how quickly the hatred is gone after someone is responsible for the death of his entire family and he knows for a fact it was her idea (even if she was being used)