Re: Rock - Reviews

Some errors but quite erotic

Am waiting for the couple Leah and Ellis face off how they deal with each other how does Leah feel the same pain she made Pamela gone through and how Ellis explains his cheating with other woman

This novel is seriously nice and original unlike some other novels I know. The idea for the plot, the synopsis and the world building was seriously top notch. I will put it into more simpler terms this novel is amazing. However, like every other novel, the author made some mistakes. And that is adding too much of descriptions and a few grammatical errors

A fun and in a way, a new take on the genre. MC is level headed and has a fun build. I'm looking forward to more and hope to see him get his pay day.

Pretty good I think ! ! !Pretty good I think ! ! !Pretty good I think ! ! !

I really enjoyed reading this novel. It had an amazing story line! But, please update it more than one chapter a day. I can’t get enough. Him becoming richer really made me happy since what he’s been through.

I mean so far it's ok, but his naive character annoys me. I understand that as someone from earth he is afraid of killing, but I don't think Veronica does any unjust killing. in this kind of might makes right world, if someone disrespects you no one will bat an eye if u kill them. He keeps talking about changing Veronica, but he is the one who has to change. also, is killing not part of his training as someone meant to protect Veronica? seriously man he has to accept the reality of the situation he seems like some kinda fairytale hero

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The story is suitable for those who likes slice of life genre and this might attract young customers (aka teenagers in their school days). There are less description and details in regards for the surrounding, I think that's all! The story itself are homie and warm! Keep up the good work!

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It's an amazing story. I can't wait for more adventure. Hope you can upload more chapter everyday. Good job Good job Goof job Good job Good job Goof job Good job Good job Goof job

So I like the way the novel is written, but a little more description would help the audience connect with the world. Like set the scene before going into it, so the reader can imagine that scene behind the characters. Example would be two characters fighting... but you can give like even 3 lines of description on a jungle behind them, will allow the reader to place a jungle background behind then, rather than a plain white void. Also, the updates have stopped, I hope you will continue then soon