I hope that this book will be selected is much better than similar novels (the mc has to find out how to improve his skeleton himself, and not, as in others, the system gives step by step what you need to do to improve the pet)
This is great! I enjoy this read. From a reader's pov it has just the right amount of enjoyment to keep someone reading and I hope you continue with what you're doing. I feel you will introduce more entities so I hope you bring the scare out of them. Overall good work.
The storyline seemed promising at first glance, but it quickly devolved into a convoluted mess of clichés and predictable plot twists. The characters lacked depth and development, making it impossible
