Please please for all things good in life get a new editor. I am still trying to read it however it is very very difficult. If you edited yourself my apologies, please hire an editor. I feel this story has potential to be good. Which is why I am suffering through trying to make sense of it. But, it mentally hurts and it takes away from the story. It has taken me 2 days to read 29 chapters just because I have to mentally edit and re read for anything to make sense.
