Original Creator (Lord of Mystery Fan-Fic) - Reviews

it's alright. don't come into this expecting great writing and characters. just something to pass the time with. a somewhat godlike mc due to his system and transmigration.

It cant even clean shoes of cultivation chat group. There is nothing likeable if you are not into "oh look at me, im better than everyone else even people who are clearly better than me"

The beauty of the work astounds me I find it very fulfilling. I love the ideas and how they are woven together to make a story, intertwining different parts and pieces together to make a whole.

Staring at one another, there existed an awkward silence between them as Cai Lin and Joel tried to process what Xiao Han had said. This was a scenario they did not wish to see as they did not want Rong Wen to be involved in this life. They had first handed seen and felt what it was to fight unnatural beings and how the government treated them. In most cases, captured beings would be subjected to torture for info and many other inhuman treatments. To them this was just cold-blooded and felt disgusted at it. But what could they do? They chose this lifestyle to live on, to them Rong Wen was also one of the main reasons as to why they wish to live on.

Sorry to hear that :/ guess i’ll have to improve as an author... but I did state that this was my first story, and that some things might not make any sense... it all makes perfect sense in my head though...

Rosè:"Thank you for picking me up darling...."

But as he was about to give his reaction he saw the hand rise up again in the air. The same movement caught him off guard again as he saw the raised arm come straight at his face again. The time seemed to slow down as he even forgot to blink. With a black look on his face he saw the hand fall straight on his face and soon the loud voice sounded again in the air.

The person who spoke up is Matsui Rika, the niece of the English teacher and childhood friend of Saori. Because of their mother and aunt's relationship, as well as leaving close to each other, the two had known one another for a long time. Although the original is not as close to Rika as Saori is, they still kept an acquaintance relationship and sometimes hang out. However, the original did not like the tomboy Rika too much though.

Setelah membaca doa tidur, Jeffry mulai memejamkan matanya kembali sambil tersenyum singkat. Jeffry pun akhirnya tertidur.

Old Sun : " tentu saja, ini dia (memberikan inti core), sekarang berikan pil divine untuk menyembuhkan kedua cucuku.

You Think to be invisible Now you Vanish you Backstab the last hunter

2 and 3. Armageddon is a shapeshifter that is made up of muscles, eyes, and organs which are stuck together to form an abomination with wings, his favorite form is a doggo that acts as a nice doggo would, while Ragnarok is a shapeshifter that is made up of bones, teeth, and horns that are connected to form armors that will frighten even gods, he prefers to be 2 armor sets walking around as guards for Mint, they think of themselves as brothers in arms and they are very close to each other.