Very nice so far. Haven't seen any errors in your writing style and your word choices are quite intriguing, to say the least. Synopsis: Tbh, this is the only part of the book that I didn't truly like. I do find it appealing whenever authors include a section of the story within the synopsis which you did quite well. However, you never really mentioned what the story was about which is why I didn't give the full 5 stars. All I got from the synopsis was a little insight into the characters' personalities and that it seemed to be a cultivation novel. Would be good if you added a bit more information on the entire setting of the story.Writing Quality: You could normally consider me part of the grammar police. However, there were no mistakes that I saw within your grammar or writing. It was all perfect unless I overlooked something which I hope I didn't. Great Job!Story Development: Pacing is a little slow at the start but that's fine. Keep doing what you're doing.Character Design: Not much said here. You barely described the characters unless I overlooked something. You only used broad terms like "Beautiful" etc. But that's perfectly fine as it is a matter of preference. Some readers like to imagine how the characters look instead of having them described by the author.Overall, a great job so far. The book has potential and I wish you all the best author!
