Once rejected, twice shy - Reviews

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I loved the how the author introduced the background of MC before the transmigration! I hate when authors start the novels with the MCs already in full swing and not even caring about their past lives. In this novel the MC morn for his past life but he also had a closure for his past life. I also loved the character descriptions.Specifically AURORA AND AYIA I LOVE YOU GIRLS.

Started off with a very self aware MC of the cliches in urban novels. While the writing did more telling, instead of showing, I really wanted to give it a chance.It only took about 13 chapters for him to forget all of that and embark on arrogant, very cringe face slapping. Kudos to the people who kept going to chapter 100. 20 was enough for me.

The title should be changed from "Fantasy: I can instantly comprehend everything" to "Fantasy: I always date with my junior sister" or "Fantasy: My junior sister always harass me"

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spoiler MC's mentality and thinking gets worse sees something interesting let's just give it to others he finds one of a kind soul bones or soul pet eggsor something he doesn't wanna go through the trouble why dont you just spill all your secrets

Now that it's been a year I'm honestly quite sad that only 26 chapters has been written. Time flies when you're bored. Anyways I just wanted to say that I spent some money (I totally didn't cry) and bought grammarly premium and some apps along with a bunch of writing utensils which will greatly increase the quality of my work. Although the release rate is still quite low since I have a life to live and homework to burn, I still try and write when I have enough motivation (I've been banned from red bull because I'm in puberty and I can no longer fly) Special thanks to Tam123 And our MHA friend Deku for following me all the way to chapter 26 already. I'm really glad. Now that I'm back in London I just have to finish a quick chess tournament and I will start releasing again. Well, enough of this 140 character+ review and time to start writing!

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Amazing story, biggest problem are the lack of chapters so I hope that at some point we can at least get a chapter a day, hopefully not at the cost of the quality

this novel is good writing isn't bad either and i also find mc a idiot for not making use of the future knowledge he has. this is very slow paced (I don't know if I'm the impatient one here) those who like romance type of novel should definitely try to read. and I hope to author to make mc little more smart.

I liked the whole Alien, Planet hopping, Battle Royale concept that the Author has implemented. Also I don't know why, maybe because I'm a geek for games and survival genre in general, I found the forst four chapters really interesting. The characters aren't described well as of now since it only 4 chapters, but definitely a good story ?