A decent time waster, 140 character minimum really? A decent time waster, 140 character minimum really? A decent time waster, 140 character minimum really? A decent time waster, 140 character minimum really?
--Female Martial Empress--Why did the author put the word "Female" when Empress already hints the protagonist is a SHE?I find the idea entertaining, I see potential - but it's still raw. " A Martial Art Prodigy/God of War killed himself over failed romance and reincarnated as a ~female~ in a low tide Realm. And some time after while still in denial of his gender caught the eye of a Sect recruiter. She then brought "her" to the sect where everyone is ogling and a haughty patriarch that wants "her" in his harem. Oh My "The writing needs a lot of work. I hope the sto take inspiration in World Building from I wish to read this again when it's mature.
Hey. Looks like someone stole and published your story on Amazon. https://***.amazon.com/Survivors-Path-Braxus-ebook/dp/B08L2F3XZ5/As the author and original rights holder, you can get the novel taken down if you submit a copyright violation claim at the bottom of the novel page. Best of luck, ramon
This is really good! Although the synaposis and actually story line threw me off a bit i kind of just learned to deal with it as it flows. I enjoy the informal and casual writing style as well as the aesthetics used when describing characters. Idek how this story will progress and that excites me alot!
