Just like what you've asked for in your post, I won't comment much on the other part of the story. Your English is superb. It is superb in a way that it is natural and smooth. Neither does it sound awkward nor contains grammatically incorrect statements.
Sebuah kisah yang sangat menarik...menikah sekian tahun masih perawan, waw! Bahkan hubungan sudah retak kembali menjalin kisah dengan mantan, lanjutkan imajinasimu Thor...I like it, be succes!
