My MCV and The Apoclypse - Reviews

A honest review from someone who read this story from the beginning and quit the story about six months ago.At the start, this story was mostly focused on mecha with a sorta gamer system added on and that still seems like the overall best part of the story to me. This story start wasn’t really that complex but it had heart and didn’t take itself to seriously in the beginning, so it was a lot more of a light hearted story about a kid loving mecha which seem like one of the main reasons, most people started reading this story in the first place. After the beginning of this story ended, it got slowly weighed down by random things that rarely became interesting again after the first time being shown or they were never interesting in the first place.Anyway I am now going to start talking about one of the main things I dislike most about this story and one of the main reasons I quit this story in this first place. That is the bad investment habits that the author has. There are times when the author make a random choice which can be good or bad and that is very normal thing to do but if the choice is bad or at the very least uninteresting, the author like to double down or even triple down to make it work in story and leave behind the parts that made this story interesting. The best example of this investment sink, that the author like to do is the main female lead of the story. The main female of this story started as a weird fusion of just some of the worst negative starter traits I have ever seen in a female character and she did end up becoming a decent character after a lot of time but the amount of time needed for that to happen was literally insane an even then she still wasn’t a better character then the student, the spy and the childhood love interest who only pop up twice.

A very good story, with a excelent background world, funny moments and good story so far. The grammar can be improved but it is not that bad.Updated every day, and with a lot of story development.There is not only battles and level ups, in fact the main character do not really care about these things, he is fine with have fun.I like it a lot.I hope the author keeps writing the novel

Its a great story so far, great job! I’M a fan of dirty, gory details so I’m definitly intrigued. Its not my type genre, but I enjoy a good plot and this book has it.

Hi, everyone...I just wanted to share what's in my mind and just so you know the cover that I used for both my stories wasn't mine...all the credits goes to the owner of the pics and I did 'borrowing' it just to compliment with the titles. Thanks and sorry.?? Posting my own review ??

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I ran to my bathroom to turn the facite on but no water came out.

For the next 8 days ray hunted like a mad man trying to level up the systems much as he could and after 8 days it was time for him to meet the starks.

Yun Zin was very afraid of his father so when he saw that his mother was present in the room he no longer hesitated and ran in his direction.

She never thought a deadly sickness will be the key to giving her a good last memory.

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

She was pretty certain that the situation couldn't get any worse. Oh, she wasn't stupid to think that Fairy Tail had won.

Sampson made it to the bar about 20 minutes ahead of schedule and the private room was not yet ready for him. So he sat at the adjoining restaurants bar and orders two finders of their best whiskey. The young bartender didn't blink twice and poured the expensive liquor. Everyone knew that the Dancing Rose Restaurant not only served the general public but had private rooms that often hosted the most elite of the city. The Restaurants bar was pushed to the side and as Sampson looked into the mirrors behind the wall of glassware and liquors he could watch the diners here.