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My Abused Mate
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Oh lord how I cried! I Love this story so much!
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I love this series so far.
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Don't worry, I may be the author of this novel, but I know how to be unbiased in my self-criticism. Where to start... Oh yes, so the writing during the first 30-40 chapters is rather rough either in grammar or in the accuracy of some information, the reason of that is that English isn't my first language and that taking into account that this is my first novel I didn't took enough time to verify certain things I wrote, please bear with me, I have improved a lot in the meantime (I swear). I'm planning to edit all of this but it's not going to happen right away... Tell yourself that if you like the beginning, the story can only get better and better as you go through the chapters. Also, the biggest weakness I would attribute to my novel is the pace of publishing, I'm not regular (though that might change in the next few months as I'm on vacation and fully focused on this)... BUT (yes, we're finally getting to the part where I stop bashing my own novel and that I will tell you why you should read it). -Although some of the (secondary) characters may sometimes seem stereotypical (anyway, if they do, they won't stay in the story long enough to have an importance), each of the main characters is unique and if you like characters who act logically you will love the MC and his compagnions (except one, or maybe two).-The story revolves around different mythologies, different pantheons of deities as well as different folklores and on this side you will be spoiled. -I am very active in the comments as well as on discord (Barbare#6899) so if you have questions, ask them and you will be sure to get an answer. So... I think that's more or less everything
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Basically he has a game like system to help power him up. This world is connected to another that spawns demons and makes origin power which allows some people to develop classes. While he is a from this world there is no real background given yet. He seems like a slightly smart typical young man and his first class is sword saint ( Uber class but not the highest). With his cheat he can do draws using his lifespan 1 yr = 1draw like a mobile game. He can absorb life from Demons.
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You got to edit the whole book so many mistakes the flow of the story have so many unexplained parts and actions that just pop up its a good novel please fix it
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great story, I like the world building and everything about the book
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I don't know why the translator is even bothering working on this bookWorst book I have ever readThe story development and the character design sucks
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Nice plot. Would recommend it to anyone who likes reading, looking forward to the next chapter. You did a good job, author. Keep it up.     
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Honestly this is fantastic just hope it stays that way cus as the author said most monster fics are ruined by an MC wanting his humanity back and the authors assuming the mankind wont just put a bullet/sword/arrow in the MC's head for being a sentient monster, and as a human i can confidently say we ain't that nice.
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I've read all the free chapters. The MC is a moron. He whines, complains, and does and says things that made me wish I could reach through my screen and slap him for being a moron. The first 10-15 chapters are hard to read because the MC is a moron. The story does get better as the tory progresses, but after 52 chapters I can count the number of times the MC did or said something I thought was moronic with one hand. If you have any doubt about this review read the book, then read the comments left by other readers.
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I was enthralled  in the beginning because I love stories about magic but about after chapter 50 the story got really really repetitive you have the mc fighting the same battles over and over again with the same lines and story as he previously went through  and then once he entered the last door you basiclly copied and pasted chapter 97 on 99 it just seems you are doing filler pieces for more chapters and my Iinterest in the book is dwindling but I’ll read on in hopes.

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